>>nice poem, i can feel your passion. your usage of words are great and certain lines caught my eyes straight away, others seemed lost and mixed up...forced even.<<

>>b.t.w - when you slit someones throat they dont scream, they are unable to as the vocal chords are fragile and get severed - (C.S.I/any horror film with throat slashing)<<

very well done though.

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