by Peace And Dinos Jun 22, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
As tears poor down from the sky, |
This is really moveing to me and you did a great job! :D 5/5 |
by Not Enough
I think it's a little short, but says what needs to be said. I think the emotion could be better if you stopped trying to force the rymes. They sound a littel childish. |