Humming A Sad Song

by Peace And Dinos   Jun 22, 2009


As tears poor down from the sky,
And lightning lights the clouds up high,
I sit here crying,
All soaking wet,
Only trying to make myself forget.

Now I'm humming that sad little song,
Solely trying to find the path that belongs,
Sitting here out in the pouring rain,
Just trying to wash away all my pain.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Kelsie Danielle

    This is really moveing to me and you did a great job! :D 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    I think it's a little short, but says what needs to be said. I think the emotion could be better if you stopped trying to force the rymes. They sound a littel childish.

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