Awe i really liked it. and for you or anyone to just be themselves is DEFFINTLEY not an epic fail. the people that don't accept em are.

f**ck the others and just do what ya want. =]

5/5

~tia

That was great... I was really moved by this poem. I can really relate to it since I'm one of those who are surrounded by criticisms too. I Loved it... 5/5

Very well written. I liked this part:
The world has become tainted,
society corrupted to the core.

Aweh, I really enjoyed reading this entire piece. Every line is so true. Society has become so immensely corrupt. You did a great job with wording this, and I also loved the imagery you gave. (: 5/5. I would also appreciate it if you would comment/rate any of my newer poems. Sad to hear you've quit writing. :/ Well, thank youu!

Ireally liked the rythm and flow to that poem. it slid off the tongue easily and it is so good to see something different from the generic 4 line stanzas with simple ryhme schems. i also loved your message in the poem. it trully is so easy to be ostracized because we dont fit in. i especially liked the stanza
"Criticized by many and for what?
Having standards?
When did wanting decency,
Go out of style?
How about loyalty?
Are these now but transgressions"
really god. so a 5 for an excelent poem

The title was calling me lol ... I wasn't disappointed either. I'm glad you're proud of yourself and so you should be. People need to grow up and fast hehe. Wonderful job, 5/5. Em x

Wow, I haven't havent read a poem ive liked this much in a while. I really made...so thiank. Keep writing

No ur really gd actually...well done!!
this one is like donu just so full off harmony between words...ideas and thoughts..
excellent 5/5

Nice poem. 5/5

This interesting..is it about yourself or someone you know??

What a beautiful poem! Okay, the stanzas were unique and well-structured! I also really enjoyed the wording of this beautiful piece!!

Great job!!! 5/5

Nice poem 5/5 really touched me !!

The world has become tainted,
society corrupted to the core.
I am but a unique individual,
But I am subject to scorn.
I carry this burden with pride,
To fight for individuality,
It is the noblest of things.

This ^ stanza speaks to me and is wonderful. Though the entire poem is amazing. Fantastic job! It is so well written, as well