Comments : Mars

  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen

    Together your
    ^^ It supposed to be you're

    always on my mine
    ^^ I think what you menat was mind instead of mine

    you mean lot to me
    hoping i mean alot to you too...
    ^^you mean a lot to me
    hoping i mean a lot to you too..

    other than that,i think this poem is good..