by iFallToPieces Jun 22, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I do not know what to do, |
Excellent poem |
by Mary
Excellent poem! |
by Cindy Miller
Awww. This is a keeper. Good Job!! 5/5 |
by Cale
A great piece. I personally thought the flow was a little of but it didnt take away from the poem at all and the emotion made up for it. It is easy to relate to! 5/5 |
by Andrew
A brilliant piece, the flow is just great. I enjoyed reading this poem, the emotion spelt in every sentence you wrote. One of the hardest feeling to deal with is that of a lost lover yet your love for them still burn deep inside you. Brilliant piece, keep up |