A brilliant piece, the flow is just great. I enjoyed reading this poem, the emotion spelt in every sentence you wrote. One of the hardest feeling to deal with is that of a lost lover yet your love for them still burn deep inside you. Brilliant piece, keep up

A great piece. I personally thought the flow was a little of but it didnt take away from the poem at all and the emotion made up for it. It is easy to relate to! 5/5

Awww. This is a keeper. Good Job!! 5/5

Excellent poem!
i really liked it... it explains so much about how i feel too and its just great
i love the whole rhythm and everything and it was just awesomeee!!!!
keep it up=)

Excellent poem