The screaming man

by Jubb Jubb   Jun 22, 2009


Can you hear the screaming
of your allies
as they haunt you

stripped to the bone
and organs shown
just to taunt you

theyll remind you
of the pain you brought
while they helped you

here comes the screaming
and there's no one left to help you

youre dead.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    Hey i think you've written better stuff.
    i'm not say this is bad, cuz its not. i really liked it.
    but you should put some of your older stuff
    that was more twisted.
    :D<3

    -->Jess<--

  • 15 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    Hoooooooooooooooooly ow...
    i like it...
    nice...<3

  • 15 years ago

    by Dan

    Once again another well written poem. Twisted in a way but still it had that grip upon as I read on. Once again the grammar got to me but that's just me and being all finicky. Other wise nice job

    -Dan

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