Once again another well written poem. Twisted in a way but still it had that grip upon as I read on. Once again the grammar got to me but that's just me and being all finicky. Other wise nice job

-Dan

Hoooooooooooooooooly ow...
i like it...
nice...<3

Hey i think you've written better stuff.
i'm not say this is bad, cuz its not. i really liked it.
but you should put some of your older stuff
that was more twisted.
:D<3

-->Jess<--