Hey
i really like this poem
IT is very true and that is how love/life is... i totally agree with everything in the poemm
Life is just life though
we gotta live with what we get from it
and not hurt ourselves over little things.
With joy comes sorrow and with sorrow comes joy
thats just the pattern of lifee

Great job with the poem
Good Luck =)

>>this poem is good, it could be great with a little more effort, some spelling mistakes and the rhymes are all mixed up. your words are true and passionate which is rare to come accross nowerdays. i feel the hurt seeping through this poem, which makes it that little bit easier to read.<<

Not bad.

IBE
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