by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3 Jun 22, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
It's time to be afraid |
by BreakEven
A little violent, but I like it :) 5/5 |
I liked it, the rhythem was a little shaky, but it worked well in it. The imagery was awesome... a little too awesome, not really the sight i wanted to see of a cat killing a mouse (but thats only cause i love animals and i would never want this to happen to any animal) but other than that, it was a great poem |
by Cate Rock
I grab your leg and pull you towards me. |
by Lady Nik
My whole body shakes with a maniacal laugh. |
by Obscura
Wow this is graphic needless to say the imagery is very good the rythem is a bit unsteady in places the structure is very good very well laid out within the poem |