Another Love-ish Poem For The Weak

by Cate Rock   Jun 23, 2009


What to do?
What to say?
How to act?
Whats the way?

What is right,
Always felt so wrong.
Loving before,
made love seem so wrong.

When he left that last time.
He took my heart.
But its OK...
It was broken anyway.

When he dropped out of view,
I just knew...
He wasn't coming back...
so when I'm hesitant give me some slack.

I know I'm flawed,
I know i always think I'm right.
And i know for sure,
I never give up without a fight.

I gotta lot of love,
Yet i gotta lot of hate.
I also know;
I'm not really that easy to date.

I don't know how to love...
But I wanna learn how...
with all of this...
Could u like me now?

I'm well put together.
Yet a mess in some ways...
With out a hug,
i can go days...

It hurts and it burns
yet my heart, it yearns,
Yearns for something...
Someone...

Someone I do believe...
Who can take my all,
And still love me...
You! Could it be?

Stop standing there,
Come over and kiss me!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jacqueline Bautista

    I also liked this poem:)
    its rlly cute:]

  • 15 years ago

    by Love Panda

    >>GREAT POEM, GREAT RHYMES, GREAT WORDING. IN SOME PLACES LINES FEEL FORCED AND SOME LINES GET CUT OFF SHORT<<

    >>READ THROUGH IT AGAIN AND SEE IF ANYTHING POPS OUT AT YOU TO CHANGE - I FIND THAT ONCE IVE WRITTEN A POEM I CAN READ IT OVER AND OVER AND I WILL END UP CHANGING MINOR THINGS TO MAKE IT BETTER THAN BEFORE<<

    well done, an excellent read.

    IBE
    X

  • 15 years ago

    by Mary

    Hey
    I really liked your poem and i could see you have some talent here. The flow and rhythm of the poem was really brilliant and also the meaning behind it was great.

    I just think you could fix one or two things to make it much better...

    It hurts and it burns
    yet my hear yearns,
    Yearns for something...
    More...

    Someone I do believe...
    Can you help me?

    all of your poem had a great flow and everything but these 2 stanzas ^^^ were a little bit messy... (just trying to help) if you want to just touch it up a little and your whole poem would be perfect. =)

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