I loved it! I loved your message at the top, how being creative is somewhat an adventure; and putting a unique touch to a piece is not always easy but with inspiration its actually quite easy. Never have I seen something quite like this before, definatly an experiment, but really well done. :] You took your quote at the top and put it into play with the way you wrote out "WRITE"

5/5.
Temps :]

Hl! joe,
I gave you a five for this though not unique it is the first time I have seen it used in this way and it did make me want to comment on it. Definitely something to inspire us with. The last two of your poems have been a breath of fresh air and should make us all see that poetry can be written in many ways and forms that is what makes it so exciting Ray S

Very different and I do like adventures in writing. Well done.

It's great to see something out of the normal. I suppose that's why I have such a difficult time with "love poetry" All of it seems very redundant and cliche. However it is writes like this that draw us out of the box when it comes to being creative. We can write about anything we just have to take it out of the normal context. You have certainly done that with this. I commend you on that.

Great Job!
Take Care,
Kay