What a lovely and unique poem! I absolutely enjoyed reading this.
"how it carries caution
with all the immobility of fear
and tastes more like a sugary blend of
hostility-
it daunts me,
this new venom that swims about these veins
like spry fish
pumping complexities to my heart,
I'd rather just adore you"

This part of the end just took me away, your language bring the reader in. Wonderful work. 5/5

I honestly don't know what to say about this poem. I love it, but can't find the words...