>>NOT A BAD POEM, ONE OR TWO LINE COULD DO WITH SOME WORK BUT ITS RELATIVLY OK<<

>>SO-SO FOR ME, I LIKE THE COMEDY BEHIND IT<<

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This doesn't suck...this is very well written, and a true meaning in alot of lifes. Keep these feeling flowing, as you never know what they do show....to others. Great job 5/5