by NightFlyer Jun 24, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Branches move and sadly sway |
by Seth Rowley
I liked it but I didn't understand what you were talking about |
Nightflyer, I very much like your poem. There were a few places where it didn't rhyme perfectly, but it's written well enough that I was able to overlook it. |
by NightFlyer
Thank you, Cristopher! |
Well done good flow and imagery. |
by NightFlyer
Thank you all for your kind comments! Nema and Rachel, thank you for your suggestions. I read this poem at a poetry reading in Cambridge, MA last night. |