by Sylvia
Well done. Starts out sad and then ends full of hope as she realizes her worth. I love these two lines. Good job. |
by Dreamofolwin
A great write! I loved the theme.. how we CAN overcome our failures.. low self esteem, by believing in ourselves, who we are.. and what we can be. I love how it finished on a triumphant note!.. Brilliant Kelleyana! |
Regardless of the grammatical mistakes, I absolutely fell in love with this poem as I continued to read it. I loved your quote 'You were born an original, Don't die a copy' - This line speaks so loud and stands above all your words youve written; we are all born with something unique about us, and we should never die as anything less than that. We will all always be different in someway from one another. Also I enjoyed when you said you analyze you mistakes and learn lessons from them. I believe that life is entirely about learning from our mistakes, and as we learn from our mistakes, we gain so much knowledge. Perfect ending, absolutely loved it. Yes, life is like a climb, and we should never look back.. the past is the past and our main focus should really be our future. |
by Dimarik
This poem is amazing. Every word as I was reading along the way is very raw and powerful. :) |
1st Stanza |
by Bhavin
I like the way the poem has shaped up. Keep up the good work. Eager to read more from you. |
by Zeus
The poem is great aside from some few errors in tense and missing words. Other than that I loved it, it was a great read and very true. We should never compromise our individuality. |
by Ingrid
Kelleyana, |
by Sourav
I liked the emotions and thoughts that made you write this poem. It has some inspirational punch. Nicely done! |
by Lonely Rider
Beautiful write... |
by Loulou
Mazing i reallylike this I really believe in being unique its a wonderful way to live :-) |
by Meena Krish
I really like the message in this poem. It |
This poem fled from pessimism into optimism perfectly. It changed as it went along and the timing and rhymes were terrific. |