Dressed and ready
Words unsteady
My lines race through my mind
and ignight as they clash and fight...

"Tell me a story...
Sing me a song...
Hold me tight...
An i might stay all night long."

>>Above ar the 2 stanzas that i love the most. Absolutly amazing - though some lines seem forced they are easily forgotten by the power,love and passion that comes out in each word. from start to finish each line rattles of the tongue easily, i love it. One of your best.

Excellent work.<<

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Aww this is a sweet poem. I like the way you wrote it because your style of writting made it good (If that makes sense lol). Good job
-vino