I am sooo your inspiration. :]

This was brilliant Joe, it was so simple and short, but was so descriptive and well-worded. This poem made me smile, as I love the topics you write your poems on!

I really liked the repetition of writing two words then reversing them. I also liked the use of the "," and ";"s, it was very effective.

5/5 from me, a powerful write, I enjoyed this one!

Take care and keep writing...

~MaryAnne