Woahh.. this really hit me hard, cause I have a pug and hearing that one got killed in a car accident.. ahh it breaks my heart in half! I love pugs so much. Wow well done though with the emotion, looking back on all the memories, very cute memories here that youve written.. what can I say.. very sad that you had to write this.. but well done. |
I think you need more periods instead of commas. |