Perfection, Grant. I didnt see anything wrong with this.. all your lines are always perfect and close in syllable count which make it such a joy to read - no abrupt stops in the flow.. just a smoooth ride through your poems always. A creative write definatly, you always take such a simple title and twist it into your own original piece. Great job!

5/5. Temps :)

A totally awesome poem! ..very unusual. I loved it.. Your an exquisite writer! :]

Grant, this is so cool. I love it. It's great. :D I love how you described the muscles moving with ease at the begining. I can see it in my head how they slowly begin to move into a swift flight. Great job.

Five out of five.

Very original. You brought the gargoyle to life and gave it a voice. The flow is very good, easy to read. Well done as usual.

I could see these things come alive with
sadness as they sit and look at the world go
by..enjoyed the read :)

This is a dark poem with attitude . Creative and original. I'm not a big fan of the dark side of poetry but this may have changed my mind.
Impressive piece of poetry

I absolutely love this, it's so unique and original. Great imagery and imagination, I think I'll favorite it. 5/5

Darkly atmospheric and highly original. A pleasure to read something so different, thank you.