This is really good, Both your writting fits perfectly together and flows very well into each stanza =] You kept me interested throughout the piece as it progressed, overall an excellent job you both have produced a very good collab

I thought this was very well written. The words chosen were touching and emotional.
How quickly a friendship can turn, dissolve before our eyes and the reason isn't always clear. Our hearts break and we go on.

This is really well written, very sad and bitter at some points and clearly from a point in life where things like "being cool" still matter.
I never cared for that, being "cool" and never was..I saw the ones who were carrying this heavy burden of always having to live up to that picture and felt glad I didn't feel the need.

A good read, I enjoyed it much:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Your words flowed beautifully. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Keep up the great work.

5/5

Very interesting and inspirational, great job. 5/5, Em x

I can feel the anger and disappointment. But someday that person will see that being cool doesnt mean everything.. Well done how you put that in words, Thats something I felt to. When I lost a good friend today. But didnt know how to put it in words. And while I tried he didnt understanded what I meant by what I said.. Keep up the good work !!

5/5 Ofcourse !! (:

This is amazing. I feel your sadness and anger in your words...I loved every bit of it.
I love the flow of the words and I loved how emotional this was.

I actually went through something like this...so I can relate.....

She said "Best Friends No Matter What".....LIES.

Great job
5/5!!!!
keep up amazing work

Kisses!
-Hannah

I liked this poem because it has a common point where everyone can really relate. I found it had some good ideas. Stanzas were decent, and the word choice was unique.

We lie to ourselves,
Saying "They are just joking around..."
But how far can these 'jokes' go?
How much longer will they continue?

^My favorite. Good job to you and taylor! 5/5