I knew this day was coming
So why does this shock and hurt so much?
I was hoping that maybe you were joking
I guess I don't have such luck...

these lines were deffinitally my favorite, just because ive felt this exact same way once before.

the whole poem was amazing and that last stanza really pulled all of it together really well.

great work.

The rhyming and emotion flowed perfectly together, enjoyable read. 5/5, Em x

I love all of your poetry.
the ones i read anyways.
:))
this poem in by far my favorite though.
I dont know why, it just is.
dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
thanks love!

-jesss.
Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)