Nice job! I really like this poem :D Keep it up!

I love this poem! It is SO good! It is hard when those we care about let us down. And leave us. I used to think crying was weakness, but now I know better. It's the heart's way of expressing love, anguish, pain, sorrow, and it's okay to cry. If we hold in our emotions for so long, we either forget how to feel, or it bursts out so much worse later on..

This poem hit home for me though, I acted like I didn't care when my boyfriend left. But once he was gone, the tears flowed for hours.

You know you've written a good piece of work when your readers can relate and feel the emotion you intended in the piece. Great job!

I love this... I just recently broke up with my boyfriend who hurt me so many times by leaving me. I love the emotion and I love how it made me cry. Good job. Keep it up!!!!!

I love this poem i can feel the emotions you put into it. Great job :)