Togetherness

There is no offense meant by this poem but for the younger of our members I thought best to put it were it should cause no controversy. Ray S

My hands know every bump and scar under your black shimmering hair,
As my fingers have traced their map to memory,

My lips have copied your face, mouth and ear's,
So that even asleep I can dream them knowing their contours,
Remembering the kisses, caresses and the corporeal trance that you can induce in me,

My hands, tongue, teeth and lips know every enticing hollow of your head, neck and shoulders,
My teeth having vampired your carotid artery imprinting across it,

I have luxuriated in lust between, around and under your young proud breasts,
Pretending for a short time I was a childlike again, as you nursed me their,
Your nipples erecting to rigidity by my caressing mouth and lips,

While you sort to release my aroused manhood from its capturing cover,
His proudly raised head slapping you in want ,

You ensnaring him in your hands as his head suddenly moistened with excitement,
You guided him to your needing centre,
There I realised that I was not the only one in want.

Steadying my fervent greed and my heart-thumping desire,
My love controlling that greed with its need to share the coming moments with you,
Concentrating now as our sensations became heightened by our keyed up excitement,

On first contact your labia's guards parted and I thought my heart would truly burst,
Enveloped me in your warmth you induced in me a feeling of belonging, no being home.

My need for you almost suffocating me as no air reached my lungs, as my brain shut off to all but us,
Your lips and cheek had sealed my nostrils and mouth,

Our lips parted by themselves with our need for air,
Our joint gasps re-engaging my brain forcing me deeper as I took control,
Locked in a primeval embrace we took up its age old rhythm joined together,

Our bodies union as one and our minds heard our induced rush,
Lost in loves wondrous spell driving our all to mutual pleasure,

Drowning in ecstasy loosing all reality,
We hovered everything overcome even joy, happiness and bliss as our senses saturated,

We there as we held each other, until our bubble burst and reality intruded into our shared moments,
Want gone replaced with the afterglow of rapture,

We stronger by the simple union of our togetherness.

If you have read this please comment, as I am always trying to improve my poetry I don't care if you score it or not, many thanks Ray S