Stare Upon The Horizon (short)

Wow it's as if you held a paint brush in your hand instead of a pen, and were painting a scene on a canvas instead words on paper.
it's beautiful i really enjoyed reading, im glad you have a place like this =) 5/5 -katiekins

I think this was a lovely poem. The imagery is flawless and gives me such a feeling of peace. I loved it. :) Keep it up hun. Nik

By the river watching the sunset is a beautiful scene and definatly very peaceful. I can picture myself in your position here, very beautiful.

Wow, beautiful...