This is far from a 'it sucks' kind of poem, it acutally made me giggle and I was able to continue to laugh and smile as I read your poem, sometimes humor is hard to stick to the reader, but you did amazing. Cute poem and very clever, your hate for pretzels haha, it took me by surprise when you mentioned you were in a AA meeting, that made it even more unique .. not sure why. Loved this write, so well written with a tint of originality. It was my pleasure to read it. :]

5/5.

I am very confused haha. But is was cute. And it made me laugh. And now I think I want pretzels. =P

Haha very random and funny, I enjoyed this poem =] It diddnt suck at all lol
Interesting wite ^^