by The Queen Jun 28, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
My thoughts |
Wow your a good writer, I loved it 5/5. |
by damont
This is a lovely lovely poem and very describtive of boredom now wonder why you got so many comments and won with this one. this has to be one of your best writings i read so far. lolz |
by mckenzie
Wow! Excellent poem. You really brought the words to life. The first stanza is captivating. I love it - descriptions, the imagery. I liked the title also. Good read. |
by lonelyrider
Dis poem is very beautiful... it comes form the heart of the writer itself... you have a great mind and talent... looking forward for the rest of your poem... hope to visit my poem too... |
This was a powerful and creative write, such meaning was held in your words. Excellent vocabulary though, that's what held me from start to finish, you really grabbed my attention. I also thought so much originality was shown and I could tell you worked hard on this piece, so well done. Congrats on the win, very well deserved. |