Our Past

by Chrissy   Jun 28, 2009


So much for our future
these feelings now mean nothing
but mere torture.

The night we lay-ed there
staring at the stars, and
them staring back at us,
within them they hold our past .
I bet they would be disappointed
if they knew we didn't last.

Looks like we messed up big time,
but it's probably for the best
and here's to God: who's writing the rest.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great poem- nicely written here-

    The night we lay-ed there
    staring at the stars, and
    them staring back at us,
    within them they hold our past .
    I bet they would be disappointed
    if they knew we didn't last

    such meaningful. stars are very beautiful.