So many wasted secrets
I'd never say aloud,
so many things inside me,
that whisper ever so loud.

Those lines stand out, love them!

I love the 'yeah' at the end; excellent.
I've now read two of your pieces and what is apparent to me is the passion with which you write - it comes straight from the heart.
Excellent stuff,

SL

This really touched me. Your poems always have. Great read :]