Hush Little Baby

by Lyssi Lori   Jun 29, 2009


Hush little baby, don't say anything more,
Dad's a crackhead and mom's a who*e.

Gotta stay quiet, gotta stay still,
Dad has a personality that can kill,

And if his anger problem don't kill,
Mom might catch an STD that will.

And if mom gets an STD,
Dad will go out and smoke more weed.

And if that blunt don't taste good,
Dad will shoot up people in the hood.

And if dad should go to jail,
He'll take a drug test and fail.

And if mom doesn't come home from "work" some day,
The government might come and take you away.

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  • 15 years ago

    by jasmine cherry

    I really like it... it get ur point of not having a smooth flow...umm dont know y people kept repeating the same thing about the flow

  • 15 years ago

    by Lyssi Lori

    Just so you guys know, this poem wasn't supposed to flow. It's a messed up poem about someone's messed up life. They don't flow very well, so I didn't want my poem to either.

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This poem has a good message but the flow is really rocky in some areas. Read it out loud and i think tht might help. Other than tht great job :)