by iLYSSA
Nice expressions in the poem |
Very good pacing and rhyming, the poem just flows off the tongue if you wanted it could be a good song, I don't know wh ybut the "nothing to gain everything to lose" line stuck in my mind the most, very good lyrics |
This is a very expressive poem full of emotion and of course as the title suggests misery. I know the feeling well as sometimes in our life we usually go through a strain period with someone we love or care for, and your poem hits the spot. |
This is soooooo sad... |
by Lady Nik
What will it be like to take my last breath, |
'Just wanna close my eyes and never wake up,' |
Another dark poem that hit its mark, but this one has an uncanny familiar feeling that seems written from a miserable experience. |
by The Queen
Everytime you do this to me it gets more critical, |
by Mezmeryz
Hey, i honestly really enjoyed reading this poem, all the way till the end (though it weren't that long anyway =]), because i can totally relate to the emotions you have expressed so accurately. I'm sure many others could relate too. The flow seemed spot on, and the rhyme scheme was near perfection, well, i saw no flaws! |
"Thoughts of suicide, thoughts of death, |
by Sadespair
Great poem.!. |
Amazing! I loved the darkness of it all. So much emotion put into those words. |
by Hollymariee
Touches deeply to someone who's pondered the same things , really well written . Rhymes are good other than |
"They all treat me the same, it hurts to feel this way, |