by Chris aka Reaper Jun 30, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I wanna hold you in my arms while I sleep |
This is a very sweet poem. You did a really great job with expressing your love! You talk about nice moments that every couple enjoys such as being held in each others arms as you sleep etc... I just think you should fix some grammatical and spelling errors to really make this poem better! Good job ! :) |