THE DATING GAME

by Kelly   Jun 30, 2009


So you think you can just leave me hanging,
well when i see you, your head ill be banging.
You clearly lied when you said you would call,
and by the way, i hate being called doll.

In you stride paint brush in hand,
in front of the TV you decided to stand.
I am a painter you proudly say,
that great im watching friends, move outta the way.

So this is why you didn't call,
cause i failed to marvel at you paint my wall.
Stop being a child get outta your huff,
even my baby doesn't throw such a cream puff.

So you decided to play a dating game,
why do you have to become such a pain?
What the hell is a 3 day rule,
boy you are beginning to sound like a fool.

Why cant people just say what they mean,
instead of acting like some love sick teen.
Never mind, let it go, ill be fine,
all i need is a big glass of wine.

*Just to point out, not meaning to offend anyone who paints, its just the guy so happened to be a painter. Its hard to find words that rhyme hee*

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  • 12 years ago

    by mizzy dominguez

    It's not hard to find worda that rhyme. It's hard to put them in a line.

  • 14 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I liked this a lot and I especially love poems that ryme so round of applause for that one. nice write ^_^

  • 14 years ago

    by kalelrobin

    Reality ; i like that

  • 15 years ago

    by xXxXhes the everything i cudve asked forXxXx

    This is a good poem. the rhyme flow is good. i thought it had a steady beat and those are the kind of poems i like to read. it made me laught when you said all you need was a glass of wine. lol. im like that too. good job and keep it up.

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Andrew

    Nice poem. It rhymes really well at some places but others dont. Try to make your poem consistent. I got the message behind the poem. Brilliant write.

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