Wow, this was amazing because of the sorrow in the poem not because of how it's rhymed. Well done. ox please write more.

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So sad, touching and very emotional. Flawless write, 5/5. Em

Wow. That says alot. Just to think of the messages we shared and how I vented to you not knowing it just might add to the burden on your shoulders. I can't say much but I will say you are a talented smart and helpful individual. I would hate for someone I just met to wish themself gone. Especially since that person is my own personal escape... I'll pray for the gods to watch over you while you sleep tonight.
~~Silent~~

Keep going on strong (: I can relate, 5/5

I thought that this is such an awesome write. I loved the repetitions of the words "too many..." It brings about this sorrowful sadness to readers.
And if you were to ask what was my favourite line, it has got to be this, "Her heart alone murmurs"
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I loved the personification right here. You deserve a 5/5 from me girl! (: