This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5

~Kristina

A good piece. Not the best I've read from you, but still a worthwhile read. I do enjoy reading your work. It's true what they say - 'you never miss it until it's too late'. but I'm glad you've returned.

I can't decide which stanza was my favourite, five or six, as they both had repetition, which was a nice break from the rest of the piece. Adds a little more range.

Brad

P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every poem that you read