Wow, A very well portrayal of God's word towards his people..A page in the bible was written up here..Good Job..

Wow. Such a hard topic to write about, I could never have done it. This was really great, though, and I think I'll share it with my family. The thing I like is that you're making a scripture story into a poem and it really keeps attention better and is more interesting. And I also liked the repitition of the last line. Ah, if only I could be more like Nephi. Great job with this. :)