I wrote it with a broken heart, a sinful soul, and a mangled mind in the hope that my heart would heal, my mind would mend, and most importantly my soul could be saved.
^^What else could be lonelier than these..

It all began with an affliction called loneliness, which I attempted to cure with poison painkillers better known as erotic love.
^^Not really a good painkillers eh?

We can only be saved by surrendering to true Love
^^Indeed,..True love can mend your mind, heal your heart, and save your soul.

As always a beautiful and meaningful piece from you..

'Who among us has not been tempted by the venomous viper with the forked tongue?'
`This line was really really strong and powerful to me.

Awesome write, loved the format of a letter I havent seen that in a while. Interesting thoughts youve brought forth here, and some very much the truth. You did a brilliant job, I enjoyed this.. far from cliche write. Although the format was not normal, you had my attention from beginning to end. Great way of expressing your thoughts of love.

Well done.
5/5.

A love cannot be conquered by force and the ecstasy can only last as long as we can bleed willingly and joyfully, because I know of no one who has not been wounded by love.

*I love this part. You have written a really lovely letter here. I feel like you put alot of true and strong emotions. One of your best I think. I don't read many love poems, but this was amazaing.Nice work. Nik