How beautiful. Nature poems seem to grasp my heart. It is something I hold dear and I absolutely love to read one that seems to project my thoughts and feelings. You have done that in this beautiful piece my friend. Thank you for sharing another great write. |
by NightFlyer
Thank you Kay! The place that inspires these nature poems for me is Moose Hill Wildlife Sanctuary in Sharon, Massachusetts. |
by Sylvia
Reading this, I got a feeling of peace and quite in this place you wrote about. I could also see the person walking, taking in the beauty of nature. Well done. |
by NightFlyer
I appreciate your comments, Sylvia and Mouris!!! Will have to return to my windy oracle soon..... |
by Dreamofolwin
A very enchanting.. beautiful poem about nature.. I loved it! :] |
by Sourav
I loved your depiction in this poem. It's so well written! This is a very good write on nature. Absolutely interesting write! |
by ray jones
Dream like flight through the forest, beautiful mixture of dark and light possiblities. Ray |
by Rachel RTVW
Great word choice! This piece is filled with brilliant imagery. It paints a picture. A most enjoyable read! |
"Catching the brilliant glow of dying sunlight |
The only thing I didnt like about this poem was that it wasnt separated into stanzas, instead it was just one big stanza. I personally would have broke it up a bit. But aside from that great work, very well done with the imagery. |
by East Poetry
A bit too much going on here for me. |