So here's the thing..I usually don't like rhyming poems because I find a lot of times poeple just dont make sense with them....but this...I REALLY like this...short, easy to follow, and a really good message!

Just remember
When the rains come
So will the floods
to wash away the filth
And life will start again

^^ I really liked this ending! Usually people talk about floods in a negative way, ruining their life sort of thing, ..but you turned this into a positive and I loved it!
Good job!
Chels