I loved it, this sums up so much of what ive been hearing over the last week about michael. Your right, he will never be forgotten. Your word choice was flawless, and the rhyme scheme was great.

Great job!

I liked Michael Jackson but the original King still lives Elvis Presley.
I look at Michael's life and wonder why he allowed himself to be swept along with all his hyp. He will know now if his life was worth while as he has stood before his maker and what we think does not really matter.
I was not overly impressed by your introduction it at first seemed a digression from the theme or a show off of your knowledge. I then realised that perhaps you were leading to its last lines which firms your poem up and then it makes sense. so I could only score it a good as I have read better tributes, Ray S

Wow...
i rlly like this poem...
it flows rlly well n shows true feelings...
that last part about michael jackson
was my favorite...
well keep on writting!!
i think you have lots of talent:)

This is a really well penned piece and i enjoyed reading it..
I found that it captured a timline of legends so to speak but showed that most came from humble beginings though unlike michael who was thrown into stardom so early never really had a chance to be a kid.

You possibly could have consentrated on michael more as it was a tribute but i see where you were going with the way you wrote it..

Good Work

I really liked how you talked about the different people and their passion. Very clever and unique idea. I think the flow is great and I love the style. I think this was a wonderful piece. These people would be honored that you wrote this for them. Good work. ^.^ Nik