Honestly, I did like this poem a lot. Someone might read this poem and give you a bad comment on it because there's "no point" in this poem like no story to start it or end it. They also might say that it was words put into a poem not to even make since of it just throwing everything into it. But in my own theory of this poem it was very well written. Even though it was short which is always good but that's what life is. Its short to some of us which breaks us but that is life. A poem doesn't need to become a long length because no everyone's life is like that. We lose some and we win some you know. Its sad that people do die so fast but that's what makes us all good writers is that we get the experience from others and want to tell a story that was lived and will live on.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

So touching and inspirational. 5/5, Em x