by howwilltheystopme Jul 3, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
That night I still remember, |
by Brittany C
I like it. I can see it all happening, therefor the wording was great. Nice length not to long or to short. Made me want to read more. |
by Ares
Very nice poem and I especially like how you managed to keep a story running while describing emotions. Felt a bit like a short story which for a poem is really difficult to do. |
Awww that is cute....5/5...I got poems too |
I wish i can vote for this work as many times as i could. Tell ya what Angel, You are a very good writer, i really love this oe! |
I wish i can vote for this work as many times as i could. Tell ya what Angel, You are a very good writer, i really love this oe! |