There always has to be a starting point in love and it seems you found it. Well done.

Flattered here, thanks, Sylvia, TJ :) I'll be reading too your great poems!

'In this world I'm trapped within,
Because your all I need'
`I think it'd sound better as..
'In this world I'm trapped in'
`Your should be youre :]

Otherwise.. wow what a beautifully expressed write. Your emotions were overflowing, it was like if someone cut your heart open and everything oozed out. Such a wonderful write, very well expressed. You did a awesome job on this one.

5/5.