by Lady Nik
Makeup invades my eyes |
by Blissful
Your title remind me of the song "don't go chasing waterfalls la la la.." Haha okay moving on. |
by Ray Blue
Great poem. |
I thought this was a very powerful and deep poem Temps. Well done, the style was easy to read and the flow was smooth. I loved your word choice and the similes you used, very effective on the reader! Excellent work as always, 5/5 from me. Take care and happy Fourth of July! |
by Ingrid
Temps, |
by Lonely Rider
//Emotions overflow like rapid |
The lay out for this was pleasing to the eye. Words flowed with ease and were filled with emotion. |