Ray
What a very sad poem :(

You took all for granted,
Now I'm drowning myself
And you tainted my soul,
While you close the door
Pretending you never heard me called

It is very painful when the one you love pretends not to hear or notice you. Great imagery in this piece.

Just burning puppet trees,
And the carved words you promised
These broken wings slumbered deepest,
Demolished miracle

This stanza is so very sad. Wings broken from love don't soar.

I no longer believe in your oracles,
There's no reason
To reconcile these shattered hearts,
Take this fabricated rose
In my void suspended animation

I get from your words here that the love being given was a false love full of lies and deciet. Very heart wrenching
Great job!
~hugss~
Cindy

Thanks, Cindy! I have to change my style recently.