Hey janey jane,

top work, I really liked seeing the flow of thoughts from one thing to another and all the connections you made.

I think these lines needs some slight altering

My pallet contented, then the
Great green carpet that is my home

Maybe lose the " then the" from the first line and just put a " the" on the second..maybe.

Nice write, really got me thinking of perfect mornings where you find yourselve just..naturally happy and reflective.

Love how you ended with the start.

Nice.