Your title is a bit obvious but besides that.. awesome poem. I loved the skittles colliding idea to form the colorful rainbow.. now I want skittles! :/ Well done. |
by Ingrid
Nicely done MaryAnne. |
by Dreamofolwin
Awesome poem... I loved it! Great words, great write. A spectacular Haiku...:) Well Done! |
by Fear2love
Pretty pretty good |