Presenting a dance.. that was interesting. I was expecting you to say show or something.. but dance really made me say wow this is brilliant. Great work.. definatly fits in with the Fourth of the July. Beautiful poem written about Fireworks.

5/5.

Ah, fourth of July...I so love the idea of sitting on the summer grass and watching the fireworks explode...I hope to one day witness this myself:)

Good job on this, it made me want to see it!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Lovely description... specially loved how you have picturised it as a dance... beautifully penned... :)

Imagery was fiery and well done . Short forms sometimes leave the poem weak but this was strong in vision