This is a good poem i like the emotion within it is good and strong the structure is well laid out on the third paragraph youre should have a inverted comma in between it like this you're but apart from that

well done

This is a very good poem and it tells of true life and I know how it feels and i to wonder if ppl still think of me any how greatly done love it 5/5

Tammi,

Aw, once again, i love this poem. i like all of them, it feels like it holds pain but also tells yourself to let go. goodjob. i love you alex xx ;) once again im always here, you know that.

Aww i really liked this one,
the emotion of missing your friend was portrayed very well in this poem.
like the flow and rhyme
great job

Aww i really liked this one,
the emotion of missing your friend was portrayed very well in this poem.
like the flow and rhyme
great job

Aww i really liked this one,
the emotion of missing your friend was portrayed very well in this poem.
like the flow and rhyme
great job

I really felt the emotion in this. Missing a friend is always hard. You did really good with this one!

Cause we didnt have a fight,
And neither of us moved away,
You simply finished high school last year,
On that sad but fun filled day

i really like this part of the poem because it explains so much about the entire thing and i also love how you ended it in a smooth way with the title

REALLY Good poem, one of my favorites!!!

It's sad when friendship die or just fade away. You are always told when a friend moves away "I'll keep in touch" Yet the call never comes, the letter never arrives and like smoke you become invisible in time
Well done

Very good poem, from start to finish , word choice was good, like the way you stayed with it , great job,,Tracy R

Ok so, this is nicely written also, however.... about towards the end of the fourth paragraph the flow was a little shakey. over all i give a 3 1/2 . nice job.

Aw im sorry you lost such a close friend sweetie :( this poem is beautifully written with lots of emotion, so much sadness. it's great 5/5 katiekins

An emotion filled poem!
you did a wonderfull job on this well done!!!
10/10
xo

Awwww )= your poems are so touching, straight from the heart, i can tell. but it was written well. 5/5

I think this is a very good poem i give it a 4/5

Our lives are pretty full on,
-there's something awkard about this line , probably the wording .

Other wise really nice flow ; but I would seperate the big stanza into two four-lined ones . Very sad ..

I feel this poem deeply...i hope friends always remember each other.