Wow, this is filled with wonderful emotion. I am so sorry that you feel/ felt this way.

The flow was excellent, you have imagery in a few places which helps keep the poem interesting. Your word choice really is immaculate. The thought of the poem really grasps the reader and makes them long to get to the end. To start a poem the way you did here is a magnificent thing to do, because it lures the reader in (awesome job.) You have taken such a common subject, which is relevant to almost everyone at some point in their life and you have written it in a way so that it stays in the audience's memory. the end is strong and meaningful, I think you have done an amazing job. I personally love this piece, though I have not been through my share of heart break, yet.

If this is how you feel then P.G. is an extremely special person in this world. For only a special few truely know what its like to be loved. Anyway I am done blabbing, sorry to take so much time. 5/5